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No One No More
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:26:01 PM in AEST
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Is anyone really listening
to me when I'm speaking
does anyone wanna know
all these things I've been thinking,
like the things I am missing
a warm hug and sweet kissing
there's a hole in my soul
and there is nothing to believe in.
Can anyone see me bleeding
on my knees and pleading
I don't wanna be here no more
as I fade no one sees me,
no longer care for what I'm missing
doesn't matter what I am thinking
silently I am screaming
cause I now I know no one is listening.
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secretwind
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2005-12-04 13:26:01]
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Re: No One No More
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:16:23 PM AEST
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I see you . :-) Nice write. Emotional words to relay a common felt reality. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: No One No More
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by enigma on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:58:46 PM AEST
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...oh, secretwind, we are listening, we are, I am, anyway...it's just that we, I don't know what to say that doesn't sound like an empty platitude...your echo resonated within my heart...if I knew what to say to you, I'd be saying it to myself, too...I'm afraid the Internet has some rather severe parameters!!!
...keep speaking...I guarantee there's at least one out there listening...I'm pretty certain there are millions others...
...your expression resonated...
...thanks for sharing...
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Re: No One No More
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 03:26:43 PM AEST
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| An emotional write, I could feel it in the heart. I can hear you, i've often felt the same way. Like my heart is empty, feels like stone or a bunch of broken up glass floating around in side my body. I hear you. Good write. The ending was awesome. |
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Re: No One No More
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 04:53:13 PM AEST
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You are seen- your silent screams heard- your words are understood indeed. very well expressed
Peace and Light |
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Re: No One No More
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 11:53:49 PM AEST
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Tony, my friend,
U know I always listen 2 what u have 2 say.
I brethe in your awesome writes almost daily.
so now tell me somthing?
huggs, mucho luv, big smiles,
emy |
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