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Captain Danger
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 12:53:20 PM in AEST
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I look out the window
as the snow falls
and I'm sighing
outside is oh so cold
and here inside
I am silently crying,
memories of adventures
and of so many vices
have me wondering
why is it all the bad things are enticing.
I had a love
and the chase was oh so inviting
and when I caught her
all night I was smiling,
but then something went wrong
with the one I adore
all the passion was gone
we just couldn't get it on
I was needed no more.
Like a cat chasing its tail
round and round
I will never be free,
once I catch that scent
thee animal in me is released
I'm coming now...
As I stumble and start fall down
I no longer have the nerve
to ask why me again
cause I see it's my destiny
so there's no sense in complaining,
I'm captain danger blazing
addicted to chasing
cause you see
everything I don't need is oh so enticing.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-12-04 12:53:20]
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Re: Captain Danger
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by enigma on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 03:11:10 PM AEST
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...ain't it ironic...but...
...I read a book by the author of Johnathon Livingston Seagull titled, "Illusions: Adventures of a Reluctant Messiah." It has a far east bent...the part your poem brought to the forefront was a quote that went something like this: "There is no problem, difficulty or experience that doesn't have a gift hidden somewhere within." "Enticing activities" qualify as an experience...perhaps they keep coming back because you still need to find their "gift."
...whatever...(I've got a dumb grin on my face)...the ability to think is way over-rated!!!
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Re: Captain Danger
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 05:13:04 PM AEST
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interesting=pursuing for the pursuit,ending in pain. another good quote from Illusions "you are all learners,doers, teachers"
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Re: Captain Danger
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 12:00:09 AM AEST
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My dearest friend,
I'm sure it was nothing u did 2 'cause the break in communications.
I'll pm u soon.
big ole huggs, mucho smiles, peace, joy luv,
emy
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Re: Captain Danger
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by MrJeans on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 01:24:06 PM AEST
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Funny the way that works. . .
I think we all have a touch of
"Captain Danger" in us :)
This is an emotional piece
Well crafted
Mr. |
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