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your lips
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 05:22:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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when your lips touch mine, i lose myself, forget about everything.
when your lips touch mine, i hold you close and never want to let go. in that momment my heart stops, i feel as if i dont
exist, you and i are one.
When your lips touch mine.
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fake_emptyness
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2005-12-04 05:22:21]
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Re: your lips
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by In_a_while on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:21:47 PM AEST
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very touching piece... and a wonderful tribute to the
owner of the lips. Keep up the fine writing
i especially like the last line, very sweet. |
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Re: your lips
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by tacit_pain on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:34:47 PM AEST
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Very nice Ryan.
Do you see the hidden message as I do?
Don't be a meany, come comment some of mine. |
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Re: your lips
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by Shattered_soul on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 03:48:42 AM AEST
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That at this moment is exactly how I feel, nice write...
~S.S |
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Re: your lips
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by crow6279 on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 02:38:33 AM AEST
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I like this one...very much
Simple, yet it speaks volumes |
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