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My tears can scream no more
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:16:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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dancing beneath
this ebon chandelier
with an array of stars weeping
i cry to god
and hope he hears
LISTEN!!! LISTEN TO MY CRY
why do i hear not your reply?
i beg and i plead....
within this hour of need
i am lost, and i am drowning
i am drifting toward distant shores
across this lonely sea of silence
i am searching,
but i don't seem to be finding
the holiness that evades me
washed away within an empty roar
SILENCE IS ALL YOU HEAR!
like my cry's
lost in the sending
whisked away by a sad song
dyeing in the wind
neath falling embers of the night time sky
released by my tattered hope
and shattered by the tears i cry
perhaps i have been deaf
and haven't listened to your myriad lullabies
entwined with reverent words
but all i want to hear
is you whisper my name
and banish this silence
that resounds within my brain
..........(silence)..........
Wrapped in robes of dusk, I’m waiting
For my morning rise
To replace my tears with dew,
And for a softly-whispered reassurance
To show me its innocent truth
For I fear I have forgotten
your voice
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Re: My tears can scream no more
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by Xnoybis on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 02:58:06 AM AEST
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This is just my opinion, of course..but you're trying too hard. Like scrambling for your car keys when they are right there on the end table.
We're all connected, whether we want to be or not. We all have that point inside of us that plugs us into the rest of this mess we've coined the 'cosmos.' The nexus of existence. Just learn to be yourself without fear and the rest will fall into place. |
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Re: My tears can scream no more
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:29:19 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: My tears can scream no more
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by MissMandy on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 01:17:33 AM AEST
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| Hey... be yourself... i've heard someone give you that advice before... now who was that??? le *sigh* oh mike you silly head. |
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Re: My tears can scream no more
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 12:10:54 AM AEST
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Anyone that can write a plea like this is definently in tune with our creater.
As u might know I don't do religion but am tottally in luv with God, (luv).
One thing I'm 100% Jesus kid!
I find that I have to get out of my own human wants, needs, desires to be tottally in tune with our creator.
Go to your mirror every day and tell yourself, "I know I'm somebody 'cause God don't make no junk.
Jus beleive it.
I'll put u in my prayers and please pm me any time.
luv, huggs, prayer, peace, joy, luv to u-n-yours,
emy |
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Re: My tears can scream no more
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 03:09:40 AM AEST
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WoW. Emy's summed it all up for me.
A very well penned piece of poetry.
Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: My tears can scream no more
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by MissMandy on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 12:50:30 AM AEST
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Sometimes silence is what is needed to hear God the clearest. Life happens. Then it stops. Keep going. And never live for the past.
Mandy |
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