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does it hurt you?

Contributed by hopefades on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:03:38 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

doesnt it hurt you

dont you see

or is it that

this only hurts me?

i sit by the phone

waiting for your call

but it doesnt ring

dont you you just want to say goodnight?

or see who loves the other person more and get in a fight?

dont you want to hear from me

and see how i feel

this isnt just a game

these feelings are real

are you just sitting there and trying to have a good time

i take this seriously

do you?

and i hope inside your heart this is killing you too

i dont know if you love as much as you say

because i wait around for you call everyday

if you really love me shouldnt this hurt you too

inside my heart i hope it does

i really really do

so right here right now i want to say

i love you and think about you

every singal day

Copyright © hopefades ... [ 2005-12-04 01:03:38]
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Re: does it hurt you? (User Rating: 1 )
by detourchick on Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 05:17:35 PM AEST
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u no i gotta say i really liked it
ima sucker for literature with questions in it
cuz theres so many questions int he world to be asked
its really good

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