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Fighter-Love (second part)
Contributed by
fionndruinne
on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:06:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Dark hollows abound
in spite of pleas of passion
and presumption.
Firelight was never meant
to be an end-all,
but the heart cries out
for torches.
Maker-love is a circle
like the sun
or a strong shield
or the round rim of the pit
when you fall.
But I would not worry.
Fighter-love precludes it
and you've played that part
long enough to know it well.
The stones call out -
take heed, take hold
and be on your way.
You don't belong here.
Once you regain the path,
you'll be given moments
of keen joy
at the sight of horizons.
© MMV ADL
Copyright ©
fionndruinne
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2005-12-03 16:06:06]
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Re: Fighter-Love (second part)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 05:02:46 PM AEST
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Almost....almost I feel the sense to flee, to give up...and yet, and yet you have something here, something that will not let me turn away, something worth fighting for...
Very impressed! |
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Re: Fighter-Love (second part)
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by slogan on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 07:06:55 PM AEST
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| great poem.. beautiful flow...excellent...jh |
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Re: Fighter-Love (second part)
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 05:20:44 PM AEST
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I can see that a kilt is now in order. So noted and I shall apply myself with haste.
Morning. |
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Re: Fighter-Love (second part)
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:32:25 PM AEST
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Well now.... I wish I had posted the comment that Phil left here! Yes... there is something here that quietly insists, something that nudges... some that... knows. I feel at once both ignorant and aware --- oddly, it reminds me of RL in that way.
Intrigued,
~Snem |
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Re: Fighter-Love (second part)
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:26:27 PM AEST
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You know..I found the other two parts of this easier to comment on than this one, for some reason...
The second stanza is the one the calls to me the most in this part, I love those lines, I think because I can understand tham and relate in my own little way.
Thanks for showing us a little more of yourself, Andrew, even if you are only scratching the surface.
Much love to you,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Fighter-Love (second part)
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 09:03:21 AM AEST
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| I love your in and out sentences, how they begin, form, go into being, live there for a moment, come back, and live on. you are a wonderful poet, I miss you Andrew. Please message me, just say hi now and then, do not be another Robert Frost.. my fav, who died when I was a teen, never got to know the man who loved the Pres. K, as I did, pulitzer prize man. Ok, so message me, oregonian in californian lol. RL |
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Re: Fighter-Love (second part)
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 07:35:08 PM AEST
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I'll make definition all my own, on what stones you refer to in the final stanza,
as I have done thus far through pts. 1 and 2;
that is to say, I can relate and apply this to much of my own trials and lessons..
B
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