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I am
Contributed by
suprasurfer
on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 03:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am that is
faster than light
im the darkness light pierces
blood flows not from me
but to me
I wilt in happiness
covered in the sands of time
the hourglass always turning
causing my world to be always
yet never
a righted wrong
does time run out
or just in circles
a never ending pendulum
swinging us to distant shores
beyond that of the minds eye
for I see them
calling to me with their
and your souls
reaching but never grasping
my concept too complex
your cerebral cortex
explodes
leaving millions of stars
now I gaze
Copyright ©
suprasurfer
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2005-12-03 15:42:19]
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Re: I am
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by SageofHalo123330 on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 06:17:44 PM AEST
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| its such a beautiful self expression. i love the use of images. they work perfectly. |
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:30:22 PM AEST
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| I Liked the flow of this poem. keep up the good work! |
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