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Fallen Angel
Contributed by
xoXOSaDiEOXox
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Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 08:39:38 AM in AEST
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Nobody realises,
Nobody cares,
I’m stuck in the middle,
With a mountain of stairs.
I was an angel,
Once before,
But they robbed my wings,
And I hit the floor.
Nobody,
Will give me a chance,
To return to heaven,
To smile to prance.
Why don’t they listen?
I have dark secrets to tell,
They just ignore me,
As I slip deeper to hell.
I cannot laugh,
I cannot feel,
Don’t ignore this poem,
It is for real…
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2005-12-03 08:39:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fallen Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 09:36:31 AM AEST (User
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I usually don't read poetry that someone asks to be read. I don't know why...I guess it seems needy. Well hell, Something made me stop and read and I am glad I did....My favorite part was the first stanza:
Nobody realizes
Nobody cares
I'm stuck in the middle
With a mountain of stairs
Great lines...and I can relate to that feeling. Peace to you, Laura |
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