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~Body Decsend~
Contributed by
life_goes_on900
on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 01:52:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The smile, it backs down.
So used to being a frown.
The eyes, they start to cry.
So used to the pain of wanting to die
.
The skin, turns back to pail and white.
Tired of this war called life we fight
.
The breath becomes shorter and shorter.
Sitting on life on the border.
The mind becomes so weak.
The tears begin to leak.
The body, begins to break.
Hoping this is a nightmare and its not awake
.
The enemy comes back as a close friend.
Bleeding from the ladder of life I decsend.
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2005-12-03 01:52:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~Body Decsend~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elayner27 on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 05:26:03 PM AEST (User
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I like it! It's short and simple but it's preaty. I like it a lot I can relate to it also. I think it's a great write so don't put it down. Well done. |
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