|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Equal Measure
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 11:45:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
|
If I were falling ~
Would you pick me up
or lay me down?
If I were calling ~
Would you turn away
or turn around?
If I were thirsty ~
Would your love rain down
upon my soul?
If I were empty ~
Would you take me
make me whole?
Most everyone believes
to be a man
you always must be strong.
Little boys conditioned
that their tears
are somehow always wrong.
But everybody needs someone
to help them face
their darkest hour.
My heart keeps repeating
you’re the one for me
who has that power.
If I were lonely ~
Would you sit and stay
with me awhile?
If I were troubled ~
Would you find a way
to make me smile?
If I were broken ~
Would you tend to every
fractured bone?
If I were lost ~
Would you come find me
would you take me home?
I’m feeling lonely, troubled,
broken, lost,
empty and cold.
Is it too much to hope for
someone warm
to have and hold.
And if by some small chance
you find you’re feeling
like I do,
Would you consider
maybe I could be
the same for you?
If I were falling ~
Would you pick me up
or lay
me
down?
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
... [
2005-12-02 23:45:13]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Equal Measure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 02:22:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Its one of those question we all ask our love ones .
if or will you?
Anyways awsome write once again Nazzy.
hugs |
|
|
Re: Equal Measure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 03:45:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful styling, especially at the opening and closing. Heartfelt theme, and as ever 'tis done with great skill.
Nicely done.
Andrew |
|
|
Re: Equal Measure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 07:19:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This write is understood and intensely familar, nazzy. Questions
we ask, almost in rhetoric to a cosmic void. And yet we hope, in all
our repudiation that it is so, tha someone will hear it, and .....and ...
and dare even answer it. Parts of this piece seep into the depth's
of one's soul and as I sit here in the warm glow of my monitor screen,
I am moved. Not just by a poem, but by a talent that never fails to amaze
and delight. Thank you for sharing this beautiful, beautiful piece, Scotty.
Again, so simple a thought has been given wings in a most unique and
touching way by our dear wizard of words!
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: Equal Measure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 06:42:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Such a beautiful poem of a dream, hope, & desire.
This is a masterpiece.
Thank you for sharing it.
Tim
:-)
|
|
|
Re: Equal Measure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:02:00 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love the whole thing, but the third stanza really caught my eye. You've captured poetry.
Take care.
David |
|
|
Re: Equal Measure
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 01:32:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Greetings, Naz,
Heard 'bout you. I done personally discovered me another Mr. Versatility wordsmithin' master. Thanks. Look forward to frequentin' your postings to learn, enjoy, read 'n' comment. Darien Sapelo directed me yer way 'cause of a cowboy poem you did. I will express to him my appreciation.
wabl
KenMoore
Cowboy |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
