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My Own Little Sacrifice
Contributed by
marie
on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 09:33:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I knew what it was that i had to do,
And i knew not to tell you.
I sit on my bed with tears in my eyes,
It's the middle of the night so no one hears my cries.
I reach under my pillow and pull out the knife.
Its the only way to get rid of this strife.
I run my finger along the blade,
My attempts to be happy begin to fade.
I know that i have only one fate,
Because of all of this anger, all of this hate.
I bring the knife up to my wrists,
This is my last chance for peacefulness.
So after i erase any doubt,
I finally allow myself to let it all out.
I cut and i cut, mutilating my wrist,
I hear myself cry I deserve this!
And i know that its true,
I just wish that you knew.
I know that i dont deserve any good,
I would go die if i thought i could.
All these thoughts cross through my mind,
And as i cut i leave them all behind.
When finally i stop i feel empty inside,
Knowing the knife is the only one in whom i can confide.
So i put it away for later use,
Until the next time i try this self-abuse.
Finally i lay down to go to sleep,
And again i find myself beginning to weep.
I lay there for minutes that fell like hours,
Thinking of all the sadness i had to devour.
But when the tears finally run dry,
I know theres no more reason to cry.
Whats done is done,
And my darker side won.
And as im about to drift into sleep,
I lay there and think about all of my defeat.
How i became when i took up the knife,
My own little sacrifice.
Copyright ©
marie
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2005-12-02 21:33:01]
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Re: My Own Little Sacrifice
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 09:45:56 PM AEST
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such emotional write!! so sad .. i liked it..
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Re: My Own Little Sacrifice
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 11:11:43 PM AEST
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| i went thru this before its an awful thing to go to the best of luck to yah loved your poem...read some of my poems if yah get the chance ...keep writing ~~Chrissy |
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Re: My Own Little Sacrifice
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by deathbringer on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 03:38:49 AM AEST
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| I don't know what you've been through and lots of people have gone through difficult times but this is the most beautiful way of showing the pain ... the emptyness in one's soul.It's the most beautiful poem i ever read that treated this subject.This brought back some memories but i'm happy that it did 'couse it's not somethig to forget(at least not to me). |
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Re: My Own Little Sacrifice
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by lilblkcat on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 08:26:56 PM AEST
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| wow.. when i was reading your poem i became emotional myself. keep writing more. i enjoyed it a lot. |
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Re: My Own Little Sacrifice
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 01:05:36 AM AEST
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| yea good write but heck its one way id neva go!! |
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Re: My Own Little Sacrifice
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by vampyrekiss on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 09:29:34 PM AEST
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wicked awsome really great lots of emotion i love it
MUAH |
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Re: My Own Little Sacrifice
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by humboldtsweetie33 on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 02:57:01 AM AEST
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| welcome to the sight first of all...also great great great write...i can totally relate to this...keep up the good work |
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