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Four Metres
Contributed by
lanabear
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Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 06:15:23 PM in AEST
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Four Metres
the difference between life and death is four metres
just a few seconds stood, each one ticking away your lifeline
i can see you as you crawled, "stay under the smoke" filled your head
if you could have used those last seconds, what would you have said?
the difference between forgiving and being forgiven, and forgiving
what i would have done to those last four metres
what wouldn't i have done?
strong but not strong enough
thats what i am
i will be stronger, because you taught me to be thankful
i am here
the lines to be or not to be, no longer plague my mind
to be.
i'll always miss you Matt
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lanabear
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Re: Four Metres
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by travisk on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:41:07 PM AEST
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| very intriguing piece, well done |
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Re: Four Metres
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:04:00 PM AEST
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This is a powerful and beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it
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Re: Four Metres
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by SageofHalo123330 on
Monday, 27th November 2006 @ 12:18:23 PM AEST
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| i agree. very powerful stuff written here. its amazing. |
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