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Hard to Handle?
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:19:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Some may say...
I'm hard to handle
head trip
mind *****
What?!
That sucks
Mouthy ole' *****
Been around the block
just a time or two
been known
to wake in my ditch
oops
cover's blown
cheeks aflame
Hell
I'm not ashamed
Past full of parental lose
Husbandly abuse
Alcohol and drugs...
my friends
help to set my loose
Felt stronger then
Brave little ***** I was....
when wars were to be won
I've come undone
a little jaded
slightly unsound
Fragile
Ready for what?
On edge
standing
waiting
for the wind to blow
Laura Horner
Penned Oct. 2005
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deadheadpoet
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2005-12-02 02:19:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hard to Handle?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ruby_dreamer on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:20:37 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful. I love this message here. You really are talented. Bravo! |
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Re: Hard to Handle?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 03:17:15 AM AEST (User
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Very good... Nice poem :) |
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Re: Hard to Handle?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ndat on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 06:23:01 AM AEST (User
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Very nice, you have a very rythmic poem going on in their I can almost hear a melody to it in my head when I read it. |
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Re: Hard to Handle?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shmokin on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 06:45:57 AM AEST (User
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loved it, thanx for sharing :-) |
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