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Breathe
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:41:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fighting with many demons
a cancer
which eats at my vulnerable mind
Countless others
have passed my way
You were the only one
kind enough to...
Stay
The atrocities of the dual mood
can be so damaging so..
Rude
Changing personalities
in the blink of an eye
Complex to you
Intriguing too
Confusing me
Never to be free
Look alive now
See what I can breathe
in
Laura Horner
Penned 11-05
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deadheadpoet
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2005-12-02 00:41:05]
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Re: Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:57:32 AM AEST
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| Good Job. |
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Re: Breathe
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by ruby_dreamer on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:27:33 AM AEST
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| Your broken sentences are something I have learned to love in reading your work. It makes you stop and feel the emphasis on certain things. I applaud you. |
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Re: Breathe
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 08:49:36 PM AEST
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| Ouch to whomever gave me the one. I do not like the rating system for this reason: If someone thinks a piece of writing is so crappy it deserves a one rating, why not voice your opinion...if not here in the comments then PM someone. Give the one if you don't like it, but please offer some constructive criticism. Sorry to those who felt it deserved a one. To me it is a piece of me.. an extension of just who I am. Hopefully whomever this was has found some pieces of poetry on this wonderful sight, worthy of some fives. There are many excellent bards here. Peace to all, Laura |
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Re: Breathe
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by Shmokin on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:08:58 AM AEST
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| another breath taker :-) |
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Re: Breathe
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 10:21:31 AM AEST
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is always a blessing to find one who stays- inspite of our ups and downs- our prisons in the mind. very nicely expressed
Peace and Light |
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