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Contributed by
Raidne
on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I couldn't sleep
and you weren't around
to tell me it was okay
I wrote the wrong words
to describe what I felt
because I didn't want anyone to know
that beneath it all
was a gentle voice
that had started screaming to be let out
And she says, write
because she thinks my words are beautiful
and I want to read her words upon the page
because I love them
I love her words
she ran to see me today
literally ran to be by my side
to ask me if I was okay
and what had happened
I guess I sounded urgent
I guess I was desperate to tell her
that I was in love
and she laughed
and I wanted her to be in love
so she would know
just what it was like
to fly
Copyright ©
Raidne
... [
2003-01-23 21:00:00]
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Re: Write
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:16:27 PM AEST
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| wowwwww... your last is the sweetest in this elegant poem.. ahh and ahhhh.. |
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Re: Write
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by audreyann on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 07:31:14 PM AEST
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| awwww, thats so sweet! |
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Re: Write
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by moon_light on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 08:48:34 PM AEST
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wonderfull
i wish i knew a guy that would right something like that for me show it to her.
love
moon light |
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