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crying
Contributed by
moon_light
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 05:03:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I've been here before.
The fear rushing thru.
No clue what to do.
My heart stops beating.
My mind shuts down.
I cant break free.
Your grasps to strong.
My heart riped out.
Nothings left to take.
You walk away.
That smile on your face.
I'm left siting here.
Crying till another day
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2005-12-01 17:03:21]
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Re: crying
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by gah_veh on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:38:33 PM AEST
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| hi jen very good but might i ask what this one is about ? see ya |
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Re: crying
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 10:21:00 AM AEST
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hey jenn this is a good poem but it is very sad well keep up the good writes bye
DEMON |
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Re: crying
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by thumper on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 12:34:55 PM AEST
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Oh, I'm sorry to hear this. Just read Linagal's (!?!) poem and it seems you two have been having a hard time, lately. (you know with b/f's) Hope things get better soon. I remember how it feels. (I may be old, but I'm not dead! lol not yet, anyways lol ) You always write good stuff, and this is no exception. Kudos!
Peace
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Re: crying
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by Devilish_Baby_Girl on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 11:40:14 PM AEST
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Awww thats a sad one...i love you jenny
love amy candelario |
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