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Murky water lies
Contributed by
boobiepeach
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 05:01:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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wait is shadows and stand in murky water
rest uneasy in wait for the back door to open,
and you to not invite me in but join me in dusk part-time
your use of me is sad and true and clockwork
your eyes look at me with ugly and want not
do not speak a word of tender and you hold my hand too soft
core reaches its darkness and its black pitch
see me now as I do you and bring the hurt along
tell me now then leave me here in obscurity, to lose
dimness and damp cover world we both think old
stay alone in alley way where dark and gloom live proud
sink away and watch the door from afar to open again
with wet feet I stand in moist and sorrow
air in mist buries lies and beauty remains far from touch
I make mistakes I hate so much
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2005-12-01 17:01:15]
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Re: Murky water lies
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 02:20:12 PM AEST
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Wonderful description of UGLY for sure, from the murk to the dark of the alley. You have a way with words and make your reader feel what you are feeling, that is a wonderful gift. Keep up the good work, and Welcome again to YPDC.
We are so glad you could join us and let us enjoy your wonderful poems.
Warm love
consue
No one's perfect.........hold on......this too will pass.......... |
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Re: Murky water lies
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 04:38:37 PM AEST
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| I loved that one!!! That was awesome. I love you. |
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