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Can't Take Any More of You
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:50:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I can’t take any more of you
My heart is now black and blue
For you I feel love, but now hate
When you’re ready, it’s too late
I can’t take any more of you
I now hate everything you do
Can’t stand the pain you bring
Now my heart really stings
I can’t take any more of you
You destroy my heart; I want to sue
You can’t make up your mind
I want to charge you a fine
I can’t take any more of you
My heart is black and blue
I love you, but I hate you
I just don’t know what to do
I can’t take any more of you
But I want us to be us two
I hate you, but I love you
Believe me, it is very true
I can’t take any more of you
My heart is now black and blue
For you I feel love but now hate
When you’re ready, it’s too late
**Tiffany, if you are reading this, know that I'm here for you, and I'll always help you beat up him even though he's my best friend (lol), I'm always here for you!!!
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Re: Can't Take Any More of You
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by shutterfly2004 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 10:09:45 PM AEST
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| This was a great poem! keep up the good work.... You are a friend I could count on:)...... I like friends that are kind, caring and always there for me through the good and the bad and through thick and thin |
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Re: Can't Take Any More of You
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 12:29:10 AM AEST
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That was really nice of you to write this poem for your friend, Sprints!
I think we can all relate to the love/hate thing, and the pain that comes with it...Nicely said.
Scorp.
(Who wouldn't mind handing out a few fines!! Grrrrrrr!) |
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Re: Can't Take Any More of You
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 05:33:50 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem. *High Five* it was really good. Ya kno, it is kinda funny that you can love someone so much...but hate them at the same time. it's a weird feeling. and it was nice of you to write a poem for your friend. i hope she likes it!
-Jessica |
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Re: Can't Take Any More of You
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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lol! cant help but laugh
at scorps comment
i love her sarcasm :O
this is a really nice
thing of u to do
i like this poem & the fact that
u wrote this for a friend makes it more special
keep it up! Good poem |
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