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Clean Up On Aisle 9
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I've got good footwork.
My long fingers over your eyes.
I'm not just a store clerk,
My breath is full of flies.
I can lead you around,
A routinely night dance.
Just don't make a sound,
Your life is enhanced.
Pay no attention to the hand.
There's no need for intestines,
Not where I take you, my land
Welcome to my loving intentions.
The blue-coated men,
All lined up, audience to our dance.
Guns pointed for if we mess up. Then,
as we begin to prance,
Out falls your spine,
And strips of muscle
I'd call it all mine,
If you had not struggled.
I take you away from here,
No one will hurt you, dear.
A smile, and my store's sticker.
Hello, I'm Jason, how may I help you, sirs?
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
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2005-12-01 15:37:19]
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Re: Clean Up On Aisle 9
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by Desolated_Denial on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:01:38 PM AEST
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Wow ...
[[ I usually write elaborate comments, but they wouldn't do justice. Just ... Wow ]] |
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Re: Clean Up On Aisle 9
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 05:11:36 PM AEST
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wow... kinda strange, but i liked it. and what exactly were you eating for lunch?? lol. this was a very powerful write and you wrote it well, good job!! but seriously, what were you eating?? lol. keep up the good work!
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Re: Clean Up On Aisle 9
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by shutterfly2004 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 10:13:16 PM AEST
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WOW this was good.....
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