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unmarked graves
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:25:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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crest to crest we try our best to hold the hand of time
but each day it fades away just left with a pocket of dimes
hurt and sad we feel so mad at fate that society creates
but in the end we all cane in with possessions to incriminate
city streets the rhythmic beat trespassers of all kinds
seeing the faces old and worn we wonder about our time
lost flock at deaths door we knock the nature of our hearts
but yearning we new all about always from the start
unmarked graves of broken dreams the list to high to count
fallen child ran the mile it caught with out a doubt
tears you cry and people die this is all a thing called life
your not the only one who has thought about the knife
some have it easy some make it hard this is what we do
then some of us live like we must the stuff we really go threw
but what do you expect a home and a spouse millions in the bank
feeling cozy life's a dream happy in your tank
privacy and serrinity your face on every stand
past white and out of shape just trying to get a tan
spouse is a whore and your intern wants more but sex seemed just so right
headline news live on cnn your family watches your maritial fight
and in the end you start fresh again they took all you had
listening to the city beats anger driving you mad
lets all be true in what we do don't let the petty get in
then in your end you can start again this time you will win
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2005-12-01 15:25:29]
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Re: unmarked graves
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:50:45 PM AEST
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incredible write start to finish. It flowed and the message here is so true to life and love and everything inbetween. Makes one think .
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Re: unmarked graves
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:43:55 PM AEST
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| nice rythm |
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Re: unmarked graves
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by Xsitm on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:45:30 PM AEST
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| great message, flowed well |
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