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Black and White
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 11:52:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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black and white there are no colors,
slowly fading with each passing shade.
as soon to beceome nothing,
which like my future is worthless.
"Lies", all your voice is saying.
slowly eatting at me,
causing me to drowned in this so called life.
"I Love You", screaming it like your def,
but one day you'll hear me,
by then it'll be to late.
I'll be gone,
far from this earth.
far from these people.
I'm tired, i hope you know
Tired of the water of life slowly falling from mine eyes.
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fake_emptyness
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2005-12-01 11:52:41]
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Re: Black and White
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:51:08 PM AEST
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| very sad write, very obvious to the senses, heart felt RL |
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Re: Black and White
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:07:46 PM AEST
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Well written, and jam packed with emotions.
"I love you", screaming it like your deaf,
but one day you'll hear me,
by then it'll be too late.
Powerful writing.. keep it up. |
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Re: Black and White
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by tacit_pain on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 10:58:01 PM AEST
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| It's a really good poem, it sucks though....becuase I know you personally, and this poem makes my chest hurt knowing that you felt like that. |
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