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Cold Black Night
Contributed by
enigma
on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:47:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Cold Black Night
Hope,
Lady Hope,
sweet damsel of the morrow...
siren melody,
beacon of sterile white,
our eternal escape from sorrow...
such a lady,
this vaporous flame,
this substance less numinous waif,
this heartless temptress,
coyly enticing the lame
to walk rotten timbers as if were safe...
this lady,
this promising bud
that never blooms...
this hilltop mansion
with cold empty rooms...
the promised dream
that never comes...
the promised companion
that forever runs
into the cold,
black,
night.
rko
Copyright ©
enigma
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2005-12-01 07:47:13]
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Re: Cold Black Night
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by tiggytom on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 08:37:34 AM AEST
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and out of the darkness she doth emerge :)
I liked this great stuff
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Re: Cold Black Night
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:13:23 PM AEST
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Excellent write. I can't say more
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Re: Cold Black Night
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:29:51 PM AEST
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Nice use of personification and imagery, I rather think you could have improved the structure though.
Best Wishes,
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Re: Cold Black Night
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:36:13 PM AEST
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| vivid flows and visions swirl as I read this one..... |
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