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Tearing the Page
Contributed by
Freak-of-the-Week
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:06:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you and I tear in two
like all papers do
a page from a storybook --
(by me and by you)
then we're burnt with the trash
left cold in the ash
'til we're broken by wind --
(where we'll scatter and dash)
then we fly down the street
with our eyes to our feet
both walking alone,
like we never did meet.
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Re: Tearing the Page
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by hauge9 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:02:26 AM AEST
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| nice and simple, and the symbolism worked well to depict something a lot more complicated |
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Re: Tearing the Page
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 01:40:46 PM AEST
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| good one chelsea! |
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Re: Tearing the Page
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by rebel_son on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 06:39:09 PM AEST
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| nice poem |
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Re: Tearing the Page
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:21:52 AM AEST
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This was good.. i liked it cuz it was simple and short but yet behind it was a deeper meaning that could be constructed to fit the readers interpretation...
~ christina ~ |
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