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Love Song Goodbyes
Contributed by
xsitm
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Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:35:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Here we are again, many miles apart
Still longing for eternal hearts
And maybe in a brand new day
We might find a brand new way
I’ve been so long without you
I’m starting to forget your taste
And the curves of your body
Falling effortlessly into place
Your eyes that pierced right through me
Sank to the far reaches of my soul
When we were together I was complete
And it was you that made me whole
Now life is kind of funny,
And it’s also very sad
To have someone mean so much,
Slip away between the cracks
But if tomorrow is without you
If you are truly gone today
I’ll sit back and say a prayer
Thanking God for yesterday
So this is my gift for you,
My true call to arms
A hymn for the girl I love
Before we’re forever gone
And we’re still the same two comets
Constantly igniting our desire
And time will tell if this flame
Can so easily retire
After all we always were
Paper and fire
(we are paper and fire)
(we are paper and fire)
Copyright ©
xsitm
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2005-12-01 02:35:41]
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Re: Love Song Goodbyes
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by hauge9 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:04:19 AM AEST
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good stuff, i've totally felt the same way,
the last section was kind of out of nowhere though and didn't go with the rest of it, atlesat I didn't see how it fit |
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Re: Love Song Goodbyes
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by tiggytom on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:38:22 AM AEST
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When two become one, I liked this.
The last bit would make a niice exit to a song.
thnx
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