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This Sadness I Feel
Contributed by
Ice_Cold_Crayons
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Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:56:23 PM in AEST
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This sadness I feel now
Is slowly building in me
There is nowhere to go
Except down and under all of these depressings things
This sadness I am feeling
Is there nowhere out
No matter how hard I try
I can't forget the love I once had
The love that broke too early for me
The love that caused all my pain and unhappiness
Is this the start of the rest of my life
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Ice_Cold_Crayons
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2005-11-30 22:56:23]
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Re: This Sadness I Feel
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by sandypoet on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 11:05:29 PM AEST
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| I feel your pain. Seems sometimes the hardest thing is to lose a love. But later we meet another. and so glad that we lost the first love to meet the new one and that one person will take you through the rest of your life. and you will be the happiest. good write... brought alot of memories in me. |
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Re: This Sadness I Feel
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by brokenheartsbleed on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:36:00 AM AEST
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| really good for a first poem ever. lots of emotion and truly shows your feelings...feelings that i can relate to. |
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Re: This Sadness I Feel
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 08:43:46 PM AEST
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wow...your a natural at writting! this poem is emotional and depressing it has a great flow and rythem.
i know how you exactly feel. theres people who feel your pain and your not alone...my first poem was about this too lol great write well done! |
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Re: This Sadness I Feel
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 08:43:53 PM AEST
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wow...your a natural at writting! this poem is emotional and depressing it has a great flow and rythem.
i know how you exactly feel. theres people who feel your pain and your not alone...my first poem was about this too lol great write well done!
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