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Rules of Passage!!
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
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Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 09:11:39 PM in AEST
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We sat here for awhile after beiker death wondering aloud about the sad fact that animal's lives
are shorter than human lives.
Shane who had been listening quietly spoke up .I know why''
Startled ,we all turned to him.
What came out of he's mouth next stunned me. I never heard a more complaining explantion.
He said Everyone is born so they can learn how to live a good life .
Like loving everybody and begin nice right??
The four year old continued ,Well animals already know how to do that ,so they dont have to stay long.
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:31:15 PM AEST
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Out of the mouth of babes!! That's precious and I like very much the way you wrote it.
Thank you for sharing that with us.
Warm love
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by shutterfly2004 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:53:54 AM AEST
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| This was really good..... My friend's name is Shane |
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 01:52:59 AM AEST
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that is so touching wow absolutely beautiful.
Ben |
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by hauge9 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:48:07 AM AEST
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| it's just not really a poem, it's just a story |
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:14:56 PM AEST
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Now that was just awesome! Shane is a wise little guy and I'm positive he has a lot to teach us older folk. I'll leave names out of it. A "write", a "poem", a "story"? Every poem tells a story and I'm sooooooo glad you shared this one. I certainly love children and I loved reading this.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:28:10 PM AEST
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How delightful. Your wee one is smart beyond his years. :-)
Thanks for sharing this it is wonderful.
Whisper |
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:40:25 PM AEST
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thats a cool one
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by ThePoetofDistress on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 10:52:06 PM AEST
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| Loved the end of this poem. Any kind of pet death is just terrible, and that's such a great way to look at it. I think I'll use that point of view from now on. |
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Re: Rules of Passage!!
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by crow6279 on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 02:51:27 AM AEST
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| touching...and children have insight that we lose with age |
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