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Lack
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:44:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Squeezing the juices away,
Starting at my fingers and toes.
It makes no difference anyway,
Every open door has closed.
Slammed right in my face,
I suppose I'm just disgrace.
WRENCH at my skull,
I don't care one bit.
My mind is dull,
Pain numbed me out of it.
All these feelings scrubbed away,
What to you can I say?
Are you mad at my soul?
Then toss it out whole,
I love, but that's the only thing left,
I'm incomplete, without, and bereft.
Silence screeching, seeping through hairs,
Nothing is said and nothing is bared.
So I'll just sit here with nothing inside,
but memories, trauma, and love in my life.
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
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2005-11-30 20:44:10]
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Re: Lack
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 09:24:16 PM AEST
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| awsome!I loved it^_^ |
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Re: Lack
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by hauge9 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:49:17 AM AEST
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| a few rhymes that were really forced |
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Re: Lack
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:04:59 PM AEST
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I loved this poem! I think it is awesome and you did a hell of a good job!
Keep it up and thanks for sharing.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Lack
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 05:27:57 PM AEST
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wow... great job, i truly enjoyed reading this write, quite powerful and i know how you feel. i loved this, keep up the great work!!
~sprints |
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