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My Eyes
Contributed by
Gondie
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:05:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I close my eyes
I can see all your lies
It makes me want to say goodbye
But I always give it another try
I’m always asking myself why
My heart just wants me to defy
And here I am just wanting to cry
Just wanting to die
When I close my eyes
I see you in the sky
And my mouth goes dry
I begin to fly
But I’m just a lonely guy
One on which you can rely
For you I’m always willing to try
And will tell the truth, never deny
Copyright ©
Gondie
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2005-11-30 20:05:09]
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Re: My Eyes
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:17:19 PM AEST
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nice rhymes!not a bad poem .
Iguess i'm just used to long ones, but this
is a good short poem. |
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Re: My Eyes
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by hauge9 on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:50:23 AM AEST
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| not every line has to rhyme |
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Re: My Eyes
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by Gondie on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 04:17:55 PM AEST
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| LoL... SOme things can rhyme, No things can rhyme, All things can rhyme, It depends on how you feel like you want to wrtie it... |
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