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Contributed by
brokenheartsbleed
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Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:26:47 PM in AEST
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Sleep silently and drift away to another world.
Time doesn’t matter here what matters is now.
Feelings of regret scar my heart and blood spills on the floor of my unconscious mind.
And the sky is on fire.
And roses bleed.
Time will end.
We’ll drown in our own mistakes.
Seek forgiveness? No nothing can save us now.
We made our graves now we are forced to die in them.
Count the stars as they crash into the ground.
Crumbling this city into what it started out as, nothing.
Force memories of times we had into my mind and hold them so dearly as I watch my life slip into uncertainty.
Drown in my sleep as I wait for it.
Swallow your pride and go on with it.
This can’t last forever, nothing lasts forever.
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2005-11-30 19:26:47]
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Re: untitled
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:41:18 PM AEST
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I can relate to this a lot. I hope things get better.
Take care.
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:12:23 PM AEST
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| v emotive piece, :-) |
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Re: untitled
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:25:33 PM AEST
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Solid writing. it's filled with vivid and thought provoking
imagery.
some of my favourite imagery was:
Count the stars as they crash into the ground.
Feelings of regret scar my heart and blood spills on the floor of my unconscious mind.
And the sky is on fire.
And roses bleed.
great imagery! |
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:43:53 PM AEST
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| nice poem .. hope things get better! |
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 02:01:52 PM AEST
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this is a very good write i like it alot keep it up
DEMON A.K.A ABBADON |
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