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why can't you see
Contributed by
cherylleighh
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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why can't you
open your eyes
and see what's
right in front of your face
why can't you see
that the love i have
for you could
never ever be replaced
don't you know
that i really loved you
and that real love
is rare
don't you know
that i would've done
anything for you
just to show you
how much i cared
do you feel a void
where my love
used to be
or are you still
having fun and
pretending you
don't need me
Copyright ©
cherylleighh
... [
2005-11-30 18:15:43]
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Re: why can't you see
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by CaseyRedman on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:18:46 PM AEST
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good poem nice rythm
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Re: why can't you see
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:20:37 PM AEST
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You certainly put your torment down into words.
Hope that you find a love that loves you back
Steve
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Re: why can't you see
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:21:14 PM AEST
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short, sweet and to the point...I like it. I'm sure you'll
find that special someone who respects you for who
you are...
Keep up the most excellent writing
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Re: why can't you see
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by forgottenone_iam on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem it reminds me of my ex that hurt me a lot.....but its a good write
Kim |
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Re: why can't you see
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by Jessie53067 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 12:07:59 PM AEST
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I like this. It rings true with what I'm going through right now and I was moved while reading it. Wonderful work.
-Jessie |
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