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Turning the Paige
Contributed by
Tenthpower10
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Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:05:03 PM in AEST
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Floating in my mind
feel the hearts beating's gone,
but you're ready here,
prepared for the coming day,
spinning top, whirring through the world,
scratched record disrupts a player
but we dont need, slices through the air,
ripping off of skin,
your last true friend,
will be with you in the end
you're finally back,
done with the panic attack,
with the new year coming,
you dont need to become something numbing,
heart's now beating in your ears,
finally done....with petty fears
but we dont need, to turn up the gas,
and stick our heads in,
your last true friend,
will be with you in the end
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Tenthpower10
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2005-11-30 18:05:03]
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Re: Turning the Paige
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by CaseyRedman on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:19:29 PM AEST
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i like this one too
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Re: Turning the Paige
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by sararose1950 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:57:12 PM AEST
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good write- thank you for sharing-the two lines *your last true friend,will be with you in the end* thought provoking.
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Re: Turning the Paige
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 09:43:38 PM AEST
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awsome poem!! I also liked the last line ... your last true friend will be with you in the end,
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Re: Turning the Paige
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by paigejacquelyn9 on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 09:37:37 PM AEST
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I love this one so much! : )
xoxo..
Paige |
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Re: Turning the Paige
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by paigejacquelyn9 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 09:16:54 PM AEST
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question:: was my name just in the title or was it all about me? haha just curious
--Paige |
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Re: Turning the Paige
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by Tenthpower10 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 09:24:01 AM AEST
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| just in the title |
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Re: Turning the Paige
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by paigejacquelyn9 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:44:00 PM AEST
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| haha ohkay jus wonderin |
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