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In this heart...
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 05:15:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In my hand,
i'll catch you,
like a feather falling.
In my heart,
i'll warm you,
like a summer calling.
Just don't let me down
into water where i'll drown
I hate your sour milk
and your skin of golden silk
In my eyes,
i'll paint you,
like a bleeding rose.
In my soul,
i chase you,
wherever the wind blows.
I wait for you to hate me
and i wonder why it's lately
That we seem to get along
with these pills that don't belong
accept the end of burn...
accept the end of burn.
dw
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Re: In this heart...
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by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:00:57 AM AEST
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how to begin describing how wonderful this is....
"I wait for you to hate me
and i wonder why it's lately
that we seem to get along
with these pills that don't belong"
obviously it is an extremely personal write it has direct correlation to your previous post "Toxic Love.."
Just put the pills back in their place dw.
I often wonder to myself if i could choose to surrender all my hurts and all my pains would i do it? it may seem like an absurd concept...but clinging to pain gives me such a pleasure that nothing else can bring. it soothes me in a way that nothing else can remedy. If it weren't for your pills, and my blade what would we have to write? giving up what has taken a lifetime to accept and eventually utilize is a tough thing to even consider. but there are some hurts, some self-inflicted pains that we must lay to rest. consider your choices with precision and decide on an infinite decision because a moment is all it costs for eternity.
~weepingprophet |
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Re: In this heart...
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:06:58 AM AEST
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| That is so sad but you have put your feelings into your poem so well even though it is a short poem.. xx |
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Re: In this heart...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 01:39:16 PM AEST
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| Love yourself, love your enemies, who or what are they. Deep poem... warm, yet cold, light and dark reactions of thought. Raquel Leah |
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Re: In this heart...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:52:37 PM AEST
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Dwayne this is a continuation of *Toxic Love*
Pills don't make the problem go away my friend. It just suppresses them for a little while. You are a very bright and talented person Dwayne and I hate to see u suffering like this. Please talk to me will you. I worry about you.
*much hugs to a very dear and special friend*
~sue~ |
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