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Devil s Regret
Contributed by
DevilsHeart
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Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 03:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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An angel is talking to me .
He said , when the angels pass by ,
all the devils have to die , and I started to cry .
All the images of my life are vivid because of you .
Every word that you said , everything that you did ,
every love that we shared , and every second that we had together .
I will never forget , my loved one , the only lover in my life .
How can I forget when you first say hi to me ?
How can I forget when you held my hand ?
How can I forget when you kiss me ?
And how can I forget the time we had together ?
You are human , a kind person who will survive .
But I am a devil from the darkness who has to die .
Now we need to say good bye
keep your promise just don t cry .
And now , all the angels coming by , the devil from the darkness has to die .
Try to forgive me and find another sweet guy .
I will never forget the only love in my life .
April 25 , 2005
Danny Florio
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DevilsHeart
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2005-11-30 15:36:36]
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Re: Devil s Regret
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 03:51:45 PM AEST
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not bad for a first time poem keep on writing you will find your skill
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Re: Devil s Regret
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 04:14:46 PM AEST
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| Great job for your first time writing! It expresses alot of emotion and that's what makes a poem great. |
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