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I thought you were love
Contributed by
Davinah
on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 09:55:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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No longer aggrieved by your silence
I couldn't care less
But I am so tired of the violence
And I thought you were love
The thoughts you share with me
Such things you say...
You brought me to think you'd set me free
And I thought you were love
Yet, you're the one with the shackles
You're the one held by chains
You're the one without love
running through your veins
And I thought you were love...
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2005-11-30 09:55:51]
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Re: I thought you were love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:21:56 AM AEST
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Re: I thought you were love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:41:41 PM AEST
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Love can be deceptive that's true.Sometimes you convince yourself you are in it when you never were.
Nice work
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Re: I thought you were love
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 08:18:37 PM AEST
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Honest and to the heart. I liked it a lot and i hope to
read more; it was nice to see the repetition of the title
throughout the poem... it really helped emphasize
the despairing line:
And I thought you were love....
Take care! |
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