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The Vaccuum
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:25:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My brain weakens
In this trip without grief
I circle is limiting itself
It's Already so little what I carry in me
And however, it is infinitely heavy
The alternations become rare
The syndrome spreads
I dispersed drop the drop
The scanty content
My dry membranes chirp
The echoes are diffused slow
Repetitive
I can't get back
I believe I have made the choice
I got into myself
I hid
I withdrew
I got lost on the black side
For pitty?
For punishment?
For nothing!
By Fernanda F. Rocha©
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-11-30 07:25:31]
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Re: The Vaccuum
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:24:22 AM AEST
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| Like it, good write ;) |
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Re: The Vaccuum
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 11:06:39 AM AEST
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Thank You Anneliese :)
Ooooops there is a mistake in the 3rd line :(
its: "The circle is limiting itself"
Sorry about that |
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Re: The Vaccuum
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 07:24:30 AM AEST
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| Very good understand what you are saying to. xxx |
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