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Never good enough...
Contributed by
Beni
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Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 05:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I see my faults,
And i know you see them too,
You point them out at every opportunity,
Nothing of me is good enough for you.
I see your faults,
But i leave them be,
I see you as perfect no matter what,
Why can't you be the same with me?
I feel put down after eveything you say,
You enjoy watching me cry,
You smile so obviously,
Seriously...you make me want to die.
The unhappy thoughts won't leave me alone,
I can't think clearly,
I can't cope anymore,
I can get out of this easily.
I'm sorry if i have hurt you by doing this,
This is the only way you will see,
This is what you have forced me to do,
This is my end...
Copyright ©
Beni
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2005-11-29 17:16:25]
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Re: Never good enough...
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 05:44:32 PM AEST
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I see my faults,
And i know you see them too,
You point them out at every opportunity,
Nothing of me is good enough for you.
i understand completely
r.m.wilder |
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Re: Never good enough...
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 06:32:10 PM AEST
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I loved ur poem...i really like this part:
The unhappy thoughts won't leave me alone,
I can't think clearly,
I can't cope anymore,
I can get out of this easily.
Because I feel like that alot...so trust me, i understand. great write!
Jessica |
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