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A Trip To the Doctor Gone Horribly Wrong
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
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Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 02:45:05 PM in AEST
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Traumatized and Violated by sin
COMPLETELY unconsenting
Held down while they forced it in
they could never BEGIN repenting
Feeling faint, I stumbled home,
streaming liquid tears.
Quivering, shaking, to the bone,
Cold sadistic cheers.
My body is a slave to society,
My mind is a slave to that,
You've no sense of propriety,
No respect where I'm at.
As if I wasn't sad enough,
being near your rotting stench,
Thinking I'm so big and tough,
but really I'm dead on this bench.
I will never forgive what you've done
I will always have uncontrolled tension,
Now that this went on,
Even encouraged by mom,
What horrors await
In the rest of my fate?
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assassinatorgirl
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2005-11-29 14:45:05]
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Re: A Trip To the Doctor Gone Horribly Wrong
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 05:04:53 PM AEST
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Wow! I could see this from several different viewpoints and feel curious as to the full situation. (Of course, my son could have described his seven-year-old experience with blood tests this way - four nurses had to hold him down.)
"Traumatized and Violated by sin". I have to assume then, that it either describes an unwanted pelvic exam or your doctor was naughty. (Although any mother that would encourage the latter should lose her child.) you've done a great job showing the emotions in a most impressive way.
Blessings, J.
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Re: A Trip To the Doctor Gone Horribly Wrong
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by Vermillion on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 02:37:40 PM AEST
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| absoultley a lovley write. very griping and poetic on the traumalization |
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