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this is how i feel when it snows
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 02:37:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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watching my foot path in snow slowly fading away
days are gloomy and cold slowly fading to grey
the clock tower rings from high a step to far
everyone looking for the evenings bright star
ice cold frost a winter gab
pointing its finger at the groung it stabs
blanketing the path with pure coloured white
clouds pushing wind covering the light
unlike us all snowflakes arn't the same
they obey the simplest but never tame
fading like my path the cover slips away
blowing past and future smother up the day
feeding on warmth and the green that grows
this is how i feel when it snows
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2005-11-29 14:37:58]
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Re: this is how i feel when it snows
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by DreamPoetess on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:08:46 PM AEST
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| snow is pretty, silence comes, its heavy on some trees, while it is pretty, sometimes it keeps us away from others, and you are right, no two snowflakes are the same, no two human snowflakes are the same, I like your poem here:> I like green too:> |
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Re: this is how i feel when it snows
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by LadyStrdust on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 04:30:49 PM AEST
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Hmm this is a nice read..
memories.. |
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