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She can save me! Please Save me!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 12:08:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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Take your angelic wings
Hold my broken hands and heal me again
I wake up in the morning and ask myself
Is life worth living? Should I kill myself?

Dont let me fall out of this world
Dont let me leave without saying my last words
Last time I saw you, you seen me shaking
You held my arms as my body was breaking

I cant take it anymore
Im losing it, thats for sure
I hate when the world shuts me down
I hate it when I think outloud!

I still need you
I still care about you
I cant breath without you
I cant live without you

I can still feal you
Like I am right beside you
You are the helping hand that makes it right
Dont let me go, hold me through the night

Baby you are my light
Guide me through this fight
Take my heart, hold my life please
We can show eachother what love means

With you all my dreams are coming true
Staring at my past in my rearview
You are the one that makes my sorrows die
You are the one that holds me when I dont seem right

Im falling to my knees
Wondering who I am suppose to be
Dont know where to go
I love you and that you will allways know

When sorry just dont cut it anymore
Im losing my mind on this floor
When sorry cant cut it anymore
Im so sorry!

Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-11-29 12:08:07]
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Re: She can save me! Please Save me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 04:59:14 PM AEST
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Wow... a beautiful poem of need. Everyone wants to be *that* important to someone although some deny it, and it is a lot of responsibility to hold someone's happiness in your hands. All in all, very moving.
Blessings, J.

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