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All i wanted was you
Contributed by
sweetpixiegrl
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Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:10:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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all i wanted was you
mama can i help you cook?
may i just watch you and learn
i want to be just like you
can i stir it just one turn
i washed my hands and even used soap
i promise not to get in the way
you said last time that i could
i was hoping that it would be today
mama looked at me with impatience
and shook her head with a sigh
i do not have time to show you
run along and play maybe next time
i hung my head low and tears began to fall
all i wanted was to be there with her
but she was too busy, i slipped on down the hall
after a few minutes had passed by
i heard footsteps coming my way
i dried my eyes and tried to look busy
with arms open wide she began to say
come here my child i'm so very sorry
i have been too busy to give you my time
you deserve much more of my love
and yes...today would be just fine
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2005-11-29 09:10:53]
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Re: All i wanted was you
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by Lin54 on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 10:57:48 AM AEST
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Gee--how often do we forget that not only our words bring life or death, but busyness can too. Actions speak louder than words--it's true you know!
Continue to be inspired!
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Re: All i wanted was you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 12:32:39 AM AEST
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Aww, it's so sad, we do get busy, and the ones that need just a little of our time to be happy seem to get deprived. I don't have a child, but I have a nephew, and I can always tell when he seems to get lonely, there so cute =D lol and all they want is to be with someone who cares. Very nice write, tender.
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