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New love
Contributed by
jada
on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 12:20:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why why can't i get you off my mind.
Is it the same with you?
Am i even on your mind?
I wonder if i'm being played for a fool.
Can i fall in love?
Can i trust you?
Just for the reason youre always there
but can I trust you
to see if you actually care
I wonder if you even see
that i want us together,
i want us to be
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jada
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2005-11-29 00:20:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: New love
(User Rating: 1 ) by reecy on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 10:21:16 AM AEST (User
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very honest poem
good start but i feel it could do with a little more improvement |
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