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It Leaves A Scar
Contributed by
fredsmith
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Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:03:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It Leaves A Scar
Drugs and alcohol make illusions,
I should know.
All they do is cause confusions,
Ive gone that far.
Its not the way,
Making people die.
Its your say,
To believe in its lie.
You seem happy at the time,
But it makes you more sad.
When you do the crime,
You wont seem glad.
Ive gone that far,
Nothing good came from it.
It left inside me a scar,
Causing me a fit.
You have a brain and a heart,
Dont go and kill them.
Otherwise more pain will start,
Its the real problem.
Theres much more I could say,
But I hope you understand.
Ive finished for the day,
Just remember your in command.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
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2005-11-28 22:03:07]
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Re: It Leaves A Scar
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:36:55 PM AEST
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Good write...glad you're around to write about it... Thanks for sharing..
Jenni |
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Re: It Leaves A Scar
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by Kazzy1231 on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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| Great write,feel free 2 check out some of my poems. |
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Re: It Leaves A Scar
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 10:15:34 AM AEST
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I've gone that far too. But I got back...
Very nice write! |
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