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Stil Alone

Contributed by deathbringer on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 09:41:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You left me on a cold november's day
It was dark,I remember, and there was rain
Heaven itself was crying when you left me
And now your memories won't let me be.
I have some flash-backs of when we used to be toghether
Memories of when we were happier than ever
But those times long past to me,they'll never be near
This was the end of my soul , my heart I fear
And now when I think of you my soul hurts like Hell
But I'm happy that I met you , that you broke my protective shell
Yet our memories are burning my mind
They leave me imune to beauty , they leave me blind
And I'm sader than ever in my depressive hangover
Without you near me my life ended , it's over.
Your heart was what i called home
But you're gone now , and I'm stil alone.

~ Dea†hbringeR~

Copyright Â© deathbringer ... [ 2005-11-28 21:41:22]
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Re: Stil Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 09:39:21 AM AEST
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This was beautiful. I can totally relate. I once had someone who broke my protective shell and now he is gone. I guess in some way i didn't want to be opened i wanted to stay closed but i guess it is a good thing that i broke out. Great poem.. It was well written and rhymed really well.

take care
christina

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