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The eye of two
Contributed by
seci
on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 06:41:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Shadow blocking the heart
moving around slowly
trying to shun the strong emotions, but like any strong pain that brakes the concrete never-the-less
i'm all that is need
setting off every fire alarm
scatter around the place
trying to pick up what has been lost
but mostly, everything that was erased
running deeply into my soul
never love, but lust
and like a butterfly with wings
truly the words will unfold
speak soflty, touch gently, but breathe smoothly, now as any rage of flame of a fire
love only i, creatively
hidden from the secrets that lie here
eye contact with the volume of the room low
emotions like a seed
plant, and then watch it grow
all that lies in the back of the mind
search deeper and truly you will find
the intention of wondering, wondering the feelings of another
maybe never strong, but passionate, desirable, incredible and the secret kept between the two
Damn!
Pleasurable
the intense feeling of being near, can't let the emotions interfere
engaging into one
long written note conversations
HUSH!
to my heart, i'll give you the invitation
lowly, we love
highly, never shown
still this is what it is made of
speechless
not notice, but focus
waped into this masquerade, feeling for the other will soon fade
secretly the emotions has grown
we only know
we only share, the secrets that lie lowly
STOP! , now mold me, never-the less, control me
eyes wide open to what we have, cry later, but as of now ,laugh
romantically involved, like a math equation
solve
no love, but only carved here
lust
tell me exactly if different what it is
like Teena Marie, i talking square biz
maybe in a world of its own
its grown
all not left in vane, but secretly this is what it has became
never much to do
tell me, secretly
you know what it is
a secret that lies here
the secret love between us two
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seci
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2005-11-28 18:41:44]
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Re: The eye of two
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by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 06:47:24 PM AEST
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| This is incredible. It's so random...it's like the clockwork of the human mind. I like that each thought is incomplete, teasing the reader's senses, carrying them along on a crazy wave of the anguish you describe here. I understand this so well...I myself have been in a secret love. This captures it perfectly. May I save it? |
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Re: The eye of two
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by buddhistpunk on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 06:54:05 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem and descriptions of the things we keep hidden away. |
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