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No Need To Ponder
Contributed by
sararose1950
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Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 01:33:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Love is like a flow of light-
a gentle bond,loose,yet tight.
The story of love is a hard one to tell.
a long road to travel,I know this too well...
I loved a man once,for almost twenty years,
a gentle sweet soul,loved by his peers
His voice never to me was raised,
his words always gentle,filled with praise.
Once more we love, there is no end.
The journey always begins again.
We meet yet another mirror of our soul,
one who completes us,takes aways the cold.
No need to ponder why and how,
real love cannot hurt,live it now.
Embrace joy in finding the missing part-
the right ones never pierce the heart.
Instead they heal,all that is broken,
a mystical knowing,words unspoken.
Like whisps of smoke entwined,
love will always seek like-kind.
Love is like a flow of light-
a gentle bond,loose,yet tight.
The story of love is a hard one to tell.
A long road to travel,I know this too well...
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sararose1950
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Re: No Need To Ponder
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by Patti on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 01:57:14 PM AEST
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very nice poem.love is hard to tell.
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Re: No Need To Ponder
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 12:39:50 AM AEST
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wow i'm blown away by your continuity and ease of style, everything connects, u take 2 love like a fish takes 2 water, eveidently love's been good 2u this is beautiful what a smooth and comforting feeling i got reading this.
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Re: No Need To Ponder
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 04:23:41 AM AEST
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So very true.
Beautiful poem about love that grows but must be incessantly worked on to keep growing.and gainiong in strength.
You got it perfectly right Sara!
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: No Need To Ponder
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 06:31:43 PM AEST
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Nice flow of words cleverly woven together .
Love is a hard thing to quantify sometimes, it can be different for us all.
I liked the way you captured it in your work
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Re: No Need To Ponder
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 11:59:27 PM AEST
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I guess I've never experienced love then...cause it always hurts me...lol...I'd love to find some of the beautiful emotions you've written of here. Nice poem. I like the way you started and ended it with the same stanza, it added to the message.
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Re: No Need To Ponder
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by dobad on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 09:50:02 PM AEST
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20 years later you wake up and say "you still here?" Something is working for you lol.....enjoy it! Love, in whatever form, is a gift best shared Sometimes, it's a grab bag. Throw away the wraping paper and look inside....... never know, we may get lucky =)
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Re: No Need To Ponder
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 05:50:16 PM AEST
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You tell it well a beautiful write in every way, yes love offers many options in presenting it's
deffinition and u have certainly done it a great honor with this beautiful poem.
Ben |
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