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Confused
Contributed by
romance_pyro
on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 12:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For the one
Who cares so deep
That her pain
Becomes mine
When she hurts
I cry till it stops
The sorrow in her heart
Fills my eyes with tears
As I leave and start to cry
I realize she might be the one
That someone that never lets go
Thats always there to hold you
In our last moment together
We cryed and held each other
Niether wanting to let go
But now something has changed
Was it me...
Did I change
To much like the one
You were with before me
Or did I mess up
What you had
With him
And ruined your dream
Or maybwe I was your dream
That took all your nightmares away
But then your dream came true
And nightmares of losing me became to strong
In your letters and on the phone
You tell me you miss and love me
Is it true...Or all just a lie
I want to believe that my love is true
But you tell me its wrong,
When both our hearts say its right
But I will wait
Until the day you say its right
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2005-11-27 12:05:50]
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Re: Confused
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 12:08:59 PM AEST
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| It is always sad to lose a friend that you care so deeply for...I am sorry that you have been experiencing this...It's never a good thing. But you spoke of it well. The poem was beautiful. :D |
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Re: Confused
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by crazy on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 08:49:21 AM AEST
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hey like omg i love your poems
yep i got on puter at school so i dont now when i will bw able to talkto you again
but all i can say is wow |
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