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Dragon's Breath
Contributed by
ruby_dreamer
on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 08:04:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Ancient trees, winter breeze,
Treasure sought in deep snow banks;
Secrets told, swords of old,
Made from the ice that hangs from roofs...
Steps are crisp, cocoa sips,
Dancing snowflakes in moonlight;
Autumn's death, dragon's breath,
The child's war, the warrior's quest.
Breathe my child, burn the air,
Slay the knight who raids your lair.
"Come home soon, my darling dear;
Bedtime's soon, your cocoa's here."
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ruby_dreamer
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2005-11-27 08:04:23]
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Re: Dragon's Breath
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 12:18:41 PM AEST
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Oh wow that was INCREDIBLY cute lol. I loved that one. Okay if i save it?
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Re: Dragon's Breath
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 06:01:33 PM AEST
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You are so talented dear, please keep writing of your childhood and the things to your heart that is near.
This reminded me so much of my own childhood, and the warm drink waiting for us when we were finished.
Loved your desciptions also!
Warm love
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Re: Dragon's Breath
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 12:56:08 AM AEST
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this is beautiful wow it brought tears 2 my eyes reading it and stired my memories
beautiful and written well love your style
what a sweet work of art.
Ben |
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Re: Dragon's Breath
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 05:07:30 PM AEST
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| that is sooo cute!!! I love the way you describe it. great job! Thx for your review btw! |
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Re: Dragon's Breath
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:11:22 PM AEST
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Wow this is amazing. I'm so glad I came across ur wonderful work. Very talented and gifted. You possess the natural ability to be able to produce such sensational and remarkable work. It brang back memories of when I was a little girl, *sighs* those were the carefree days. Thanks so much for sharing with us ur beautiful poetic art. I hope to read more of ur awesome work.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Dragon's Breath
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 11:42:28 AM AEST
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| Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of your childhood. It brought back some beautiful memories for me as well. Glad you came to read me...and I you. Your poetry is elegant. Peace to you, Laura |
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