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broken
Contributed by
nannerz
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Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 02:04:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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what am i doing?
why am i bleeding again
it doesnt make sense
You ask me why I do this
why i would scar myself
but I dont even know
Yell all you want
its not going to make it better
it wont help me understand
please
leave me alone
ill find out why
dont ask questions
im broken
and only i
can fix myself
Copyright ©
nannerz
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2005-11-27 02:04:39]
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Re: broken
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by ruby_dreamer on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 08:12:52 AM AEST
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| I like the broken verses at the end, and I like how it sounds so simple and yet so painful. It sounds like a statement with little to say but much to reflect. ^_^ |
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Re: broken
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 07:29:03 PM AEST
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Ooo thats really good. I also love the last verse! Said so simply but means so much.
Good write!
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