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chapter of love
Contributed by
beana
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Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 09:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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a closeing of one chapter
an opening of another
who knows what this book of love
has in store for us
we can't jump ahead and see what is next
there are so many thing that we might miss
the hellos and i love you's the i miss you
your voice on the phone
the email you just dropped to say hey
all the cards we sent to show that we cared so much for each other
the little things that mean so much
Copyright ©
beana
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2005-11-26 21:04:14]
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Re: chapter of love
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 09:10:53 PM AEST
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Awesome... especially these lines...
we can't jump ahead and see what is next
there are so many thing that we might miss
That's not only love... but all of life... so anyone and everyone can relate. And... the little things are what matter... it wasn't until just recently I really noticed... lol. So... great write...
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Re: chapter of love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 10:47:26 PM AEST
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First off, hello Beana and welcome to YPDC. Second of all lovely title for your poem.
Dreams, wishes, emotional, events, for some fantasy, fictional, even friendship, sometimes grief, then you have the internet friends, life, love, and remembered love, obsessed love, secret love, or just plane secrets, follows self struggling, spiritual for me, tough times too, otherwise... well..lets just say I really love your poem of reality. Raquel Leah |
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Re: chapter of love
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 11:39:48 PM AEST
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| a great simple message |
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Re: chapter of love
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 11:35:06 AM AEST
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| very sweet write-the book of love is always a good read- no matter what chapter-thank you for sharing |
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