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Black and Blue Heart
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 06:46:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My heart is black and blue
And my mind is bruised
I have a wounded heart,
I watch it fall apart
You’re all that’s on mind
As my eyes start to go blind
My mind cries not to love you,
But my heart is already black and blue
You are all that my heart loves
You are like this magical dove
My mind tried to stop it all,
But couldn’t stop my heart’s call
My heart is black and blue
My mind is tired of you
My eyes are full of pain
My body is going lame
Thoughts of you, I can’t control
My heart and mind you stole,
My heart is black and blue,
Through my mind; pictures of you
You smile at me, like you know the truth
I push you away, getting rid of the proof
I run away and always try to hide
But my heart is beating my mind
Many battles of mind and heart,
Both are starting to fall apart
Heart is starting to win,
Mind is doing all it can
Who comes out master in the end?
Will I like you as more than friends?
Can my mind beat my damn heart?
Which one will totally fall apart?
My mind is bleeding from you
My heart is all black and blue
Who will win the fight?
My heart or my mind?
My heart is black and blue
And my mind is bruised
I have a wounded heart,
I watch it fall apart
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Re: Black and Blue Heart
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 08:20:44 PM AEST
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You smile at me, like you know the truth
This is really great. I love this line. I am not sure how to explain it... but it is really good.
Many battles of mind and heart,
Both are starting to fall apart
I also really really love this on. OMG it is so good! When people think about it... there are many poems and many text that talk of mind and heart battle or the heart saying one thing while the mind says another. You take it to another level when you say they bothare falling apart though.... cause that is just deep... no one else gets into it like that. Great write...
Jodi
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Re: Black and Blue Heart
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 08:20:48 PM AEST
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You smile at me, like you know the truth
This is really great. I love this line. I am not sure how to explain it... but it is really good.
Many battles of mind and heart,
Both are starting to fall apart
I also really really love this on. OMG it is so good! When people think about it... there are many poems and many text that talk of mind and heart battle or the heart saying one thing while the mind says another. You take it to another level when you say they bothare falling apart though.... cause that is just deep... no one else gets into it like that. Great write...
Jodi
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Re: Black and Blue Heart
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 09:28:40 PM AEST
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I loved this poem sooooooo much. It was great...awesome...no better than awesome! its just so true and i loved it! i have my fav parts but this is one of them.
Thoughts of you, I can’t control
My heart and mind you stole,
My heart is black and blue,
Through my mind; pictures of you
cause guys tend to do that...steal your heart and mind. where they only thing you can think of is them! keep up the great work!
p.s. sry i havent commented on some of your poems...but i'm determined to! i just havent had time lately. But im gonna try to catch up! |
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